Bookmarks!

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I’ve been playing with the design for the bookmarks that were part of the stretch goals for The Flames of Shadam Khoreh, and I think I have something workable.

It was difficult to fill in the space of the front, and when compared directly to the back the font looks perhaps too tall, but I think it’s just my picky brain getting in the way.

So I put it to you. What do you think?

 

2 Comments

  1. Justin

    May 2, 2013 at 1:54 pm

    I think I’d cut out some of the deadspace above his head and stretch out the wording up to a little.

    • Brad

      May 2, 2013 at 2:40 pm

      Good call. I spread out the text blocks to eat up some of the dead space and it looks nicer.