Winds progress…

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Moving right along… I’m stopping for a little bit because I reached the end of 3 chapters, the point at which I said I would stop and revise and send out for comment. Well, I’m going through the revising process, and I promptly found a new scene I needed to add. I’m about halfway through that, but I know when I’m done it’s going to remove the need for about 1,000 words in another scene. In any case, I’m liking how things are turning out. I’m trying to sprinkle good amounts of Russian- and Persian-ish culture into the story, and I think I’ve been somewhat successful in this respect. I know I need more, but I think that’ll come on the official second draft, not this light one.

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16,430 / 110,000
(14.9%)